At todays meeting we decided on four ideas we wanted to keep in the run and then each of us wrote an action list for the sequence or sequences we pitched.
The Concert/ The Egg Fronts (Cornelius):
-Black Screen with name of studio, start of Non diegetic soundtrack
-medium shot of Jamie
-Establishing wide shot of the empty stage
-Synchronous cut to stage shortly before a performance (the band is on stage except for the lead singer)
- Synchronous Cut to Jamie, she turns to the right.
-Eyeline match with empty corner of the stage
-Synchronous cut to the same corner during the performance where a drum set is stationed
-a medium shot introduces David who plays the drums
-cut to close up of drum
-cut to close up of David’s face as he focuses on the music
- Synchronous Cut to Jamie, she turns to the left.
-wipe with hidden cut to the left
-wide shot of a empty corner of the stage
-Guitar starts playing as part of the soundtrack
- Synchronous Cut to the corner of the stage during performance revealing Madelyn playing the E-guitar
-Close up of Madelyn smiling
-Close up of the guitar
- Synchronous cut to medium shot of Jamie before the performance looking straight forward
-Close up of Jamie’s face smiling
-wipe to empty stage (In centre frame are the curtain’s)
-Synchronous cut to the stage during the performance (In centre frame are the curtain’s)
-Jamie comes out of the curtains in an Egg costume
-Switch to hand healed camera
-The camera moves with Jamie while she walks synchronous to the beat across the stage and meets up with the band members
-The camera comes closer to her face as she stands at the centre of the stage again while the now diegetic soundtrack climaxes, she starts singing the first note
-Cut to a medium shot of Jamie the camera moves out in one continuous shot revealing the entire stage
-Cut to title card and black screen, abrupt ending of music
-cut to closeup of Jamie with her eyes closed
-Jamie opens her eyes
-Medium shot of Jamie seemingly disappointed that she is not performing (not in egg costume)
-Wide shot of the empty stage as Jamie walks away, highlighting that the performance was imaginary
Fun Family Function (Cornelius)
-A gimbal-shot starts out at Francesco’s face; he screams, the camera moves to a mid-shot reviling him sitting at a dining table.
-eyeline match and cut to a mid-shot of Sofia (his sister)
-She says, ‘Is that all you got you little f...’ before she finishes her sentence a non-diegetic orchestral soundtrack starts playing and the dialogue audio is muted.
-cut to extreme wide shot revealing rest of family (who are all upset)
-cut to wide-shot of Francesco and Sofia leaning across the table, arguing
-cut to medium shot of Luigi (The father) who is not amused
-Cut to Medium shot of Regina (The mother) Regina stands up
-pan to wine closet Regina walks across frame with a wine glass
-Cut to a medium shot of Kyle (Another sibling)
-Kyle shrugs benife the table
-Cut to medium shot of Luigi
-Multiple fast pasted cuts between Luigi (who progressively gets angrier) and a medium shot of Francesco and Sofia arguing while the music gets more intense
-Cut to medium shot of Luigi
-Tilt upwards as Luigi jumps up
-Cut to Close up of Luigi´s profile
-blasted off from Luigi’s mouth Multiple drops of spit fly
-Cut to Extreme close up of single drop of spit flying through the air
-Cut to close up of Sofia’s face as the spit lands on her face
-Cut to close up of Francesco face as spit lands on his face
-Cut to medium shot of Kyle sitting underneath the table listening with headphones to music. The non-diegetic soundtrack stops. Muffled diegetic audio of the argument is audible in the background. A diegetic crunchy beat plays through Kyles headphones.
-Eyeline match cut to wide shot of Regina drinking at the wine closet
-Regina looks at Kyle
-Cut to Medium shot of Regina
-Regina winks at Kyle
-Eyeline match to close up of Kyle looking at their mother
-Cut to Medium shot of Regina
-Regina grabs a wine bottle
-Cut to wide shot of Regina rolling the bottle towards Kyle
-Medium shot of Kyle
-Kyle grabs the bottle and notes to their mother
-Cut to close up of Sofia’s face screaming, the non-diegetic orchestral soundtrack starts playing again and the diegetic audio is muted
-tilt to close up of Francesco screaming
-tilt to close up of Luigi screaming
-Cut to Medium shot of Francesco and Sofia on opposite sides in focus, Luigi in center frame (not in focus)
-Francesco pushes Sofia, Sofia falls to the ground
-Cut to medium shot of Sofia falling on the ground
-Eyeline match and cut to medium of Kyle
-Kyle is shocked
-Eyeline match and cut to close up of Sofia on the ground
-Eyeline match and cut to close up of Kyle
-Kyle stops being shocked and seems to be determined
-Cut to Wide shot of Kyle standing up
-Cut to Medium shot of multiple gigantic bread sticks
-Kyle grabs one
-Cut to medium shot of Kyle holding the bread stick like a light saber
-Cut to close up of Francesco’s shocked face
-Cut to Medium shot of multiple gigantic bread sticks
-Francesco reaches over the table to grab a bread stick
-Cut to medium shot of Francesco holding the bread stick like a light saber
-Cut to Extreme wide shot of Living room
-Francesco and Kyle run towards each other in slow motion
-Cut to shocked medium reaction shot of Sofia
-Cut to shocked close up reaction shot of Luigi
-Cut to medium shot of Regina pouring more vine in her cub
-Cut to medium shot of Kyle and Francesco running towards each other
-Fade to black as the music climaxes
-Title card
Future assassination (Bert):
-Shows a shot from above a man walking up stairs
-Shot from below knee level of him walking up
-Walking down corridor
-opening door from behind
-above shot of opening box
-Close up of taking gun out
-Close up of putting ammunition into gun
-Wide shot of going to the window
-Outside shot of target
-really close up of finger on trigger
-Close up of eyes
-Sound of door opening
-Wide shot of both figures in shot - Being the same people
The Local Priest (Pablo):
-Characteristics of the priest : Mid 60's, tall, wears proper priestly clothing
-Characteristics of the people on the confession booth : there is no specific clothing for these characters as the only important part is them saying what they have to say.
-We see an establishing shot of the village he lives in and with people walking around.
-The village is not really shown as it is more of a following shot of him walking around.
-The camera focuses on a poster saying Wanted and a man that has similar appearance to the priest as it is a blurry picture we can tell but not with full clarity but he does not really realise.
In the early morning we see the priest in his work office signing papers, in which we will print out fake documents for the actor to sign with a mid shot to the left side of the character to show what he is doing.
-The focus while he signs goes to one particular document sent from the police but we just see the sign of the paper as there are others on top
-We then with the camera make a 40 degree tilt towards the woman sitting down in front of him quiet (this is done from the left, almost with out him noticing.
-The woman makes an awkward movement and the priest looks and then decides to get out of his office.
-We then see him walking around for a brief moment trough fast paced cuts trough the church, he looks at the confession booth, heads that way and we see him entering the confession booth while reading the bible.
-Along these fast scenes there is very calm and Christian music playing with a chorus that is diegetic as the priest can hear it.
-We see him waiting while thinking with close ups and with very limited light through the booth's grid which gives it a cool look to the character and mysterious at the same time.
-We then get different people walking into the booth with out showing faces all beginning with "Father" repeated about 3 to 6 times in different voices from different people in diegetic sound just showing the mouth saying it, put after the shooting is done.
-After the confession we hear him saying to the people that their sins have been forgiven.
Then we see a strange man come in the dark as it is night, probably 2 am, we see his shadow heading and focus on the shadow and then with an over the shoulder shot see the church of the booth.-this strange man who is a criminal with newly bloody hands opens the door, before this he looks at them, and enters with a deep voice saying, ' Father I have sinned'
-The opening titles appear through out the whole sequence apart from the part in which the criminal appears.
-We then hear the soundtrack which would be with a suspense tone to it as it is the end music when the title of the film would be written in big lettering.